As I discussed in an earlier post, I have mixed feelings about autobiographical fiction. The following is very, very much based in reality. I wrote it about two years ago as an autobiographical fiction assignment for my personal narrative class. I suppose I could tell you what parts are fictional, but that would take away all the mystery and fun, wouldn’t it?
By the way, any feedback and comments are appreciated.
I left my car running in the driveway. The exhaust coughed as I walked to his front door with a plastic bag. It was sometime before seven and Scott was sure to be in bed for at least another four hours.
Good morning, love. I hope you have a wonderful day!
My day was already planned. Feeling sorry for myself after a night of little sleep, I had called in sick to work. The idea of spending eight hours typing useless data and making numbed small talk with women in surrounding cubicles was just too much. After graciously returning Scott’s belongings, I would stop into the coffee shop and get a quad-shot iced americano that, between the sickly bitter espresso and obnoxious amount of ice, would eventually give me a headache. That headache would later be dulled with a half bottle of vodka and fruit juice while I got bikini baked.
Don’t let David hit on you anymore, otherwise Imma have to go down to Ohio to beat his ass.
His junk had to go. A cello concerto scribbled on a stack of staff paper, a Russian textbook I had borrowed, pit-stained undershirts I had begged him to bleach, and a six pack of Leinie’s Red. I walked up to the front porch and dropped it all into a heap. I dug into my pocket for the last item – a ring of his grandmother’s.
The tiny pile insulted me. After a year, this was all I had to show. Scott wasn’t the nesting type, apparently. Not with me anyway. He never said sweet things to me. I figured he just had the quiet kind of affection. So of course it was a little surprising to see that he was willing to send adorations via text to a girl who lived three states away.
I’m going to rehearsal now, but I’ll be thinking of you the whole time. xoxo
I wanted the revenge to be grand. I wanted him humiliated. Everything I could think of seemed so typical: Spraying painting “cheater” across the front of his house. Salting the lawn. Sprinkling sugar in his gas tank. Putting his name and number in the craigslist casual encounters. Signing him up for subscriptions to eight different fetish magazines. Slamming an axe into the hood of his car. Buying a billboard and listing his indiscretions. I wanted to do it all though. I wanted to make his life as difficult as possible.
I wanted him to burn with shame the way I had when I had seen the text messages the night before. Scanning his inbox, I found he told this “Belle” that he loved her more times in the previous five hours than he had in eleven months with me. The worst part was that the texts were burned into my memory and kept playing on repeat like a short film.
I love you, Belle.
I put the ring between my teeth and reached to tear pages out of the Russian textbook and shred his concerto. I ripped the t-shirts in half while considering what to do with the ring. I could toss it in the lawn and let the lawn mower jam up next time he mowed. I could somehow melt it down into the shape of a dog turd and send it with a friendly note.
I wanted that ring to be destroyed. He had left the other things with me without a thought. He had copies of the concerto on his computer. The textbook was two editions old, and he neither remembered nor cared about the vocabulary and verbs. I cracked open a beer and tipped it upside down, soaking the pile.
Next door, a neighbor was unraveling a hose to water his flowers. He watched while I smiled, waved, and reached for another bottle. I poured all six onto his things.
It started to feel good. Almost as good as I had felt the night before, slapping him across the face.
I wish I could be there to hold you as you fell asleep tonight.
But this ring was more than all of that. It was still resting between my front teeth and saliva, no longer held back by tight lips, was beginning to creep out of the corners. He had given it to me two months earlier, on the morning of an audition. We had spent the better part of a year at universities two hours apart and I had decided to transfer to his university. I told my friends I was transferring to save money, but I really did it to be closer to Scott. He had encouraged me, saying it was obvious that music was in my soul and that I should study with the violin professor at his university.
“Literature doesn’t suit you,” he told me. “But it’s obvious that music is your real passion.”
Flattered by his apparent ability to realize things about myself that I didn’t, I prepared an audition to complete my minor. He had done his best to convince me to change degrees altogether, but I wasn’t willing to dedicate four more years to a bachelor’s degree. While my fingers were callusing and my neck developed a persistent red mark from my violin, Scott encouraged me and told me he was looking forward to playing in the orchestra with me.
On the morning of the audition, I was running through the second movement of the Haydn concerto in a moist practice room when he had knocked on the door, an americano in one hand and the other in his pocket. “Morning, love,” he said. “How’s it going?”
“I’m nervous. I can’t get the double stops right in the cadenza,” I said, taking the americano from his hand. “I mean, I can get them right half the time, but the other half sounds like crap.”
“You have nothing to worry about,” Scott said, kissing my forehead. He sat down on the piano bench. “You’re going to get in no problem. Half the violinists here suck anyway. Play a little for me.”
I took a drink from the americano, ignoring how it burnt my tongue and focusing instead on the tensions in my body. My left shoulder had a knot. My wrists were sore. The spot on my neck felt raw. My fingers were sweaty and rigid. The caffeine I was sucking down wasn’t going to help me feel any less shaky. I handed the drink to Scott and picked up my violin. While I played, Scott watched. I got through the cadenza perfectly. When I finished, he stood up and kissed me again.
“I’m proud of you, Ashley,” he told me, hugging me. “Like I said before, you’re going to do just fine. There’s no reason to stress.”
“I know, I just haven’t done this in a while.”
“I want to give you something,” Scott said. He reached into his pocket, retrieved the ring, and pressed it into my hand. “It’s for luck.”
“Thank you,” I said, looking at it. A think silver band with small dots framing a smooth center. It made me think of a zipper. I slid it over my right ring finger, not wanting him to think I thought it signified an engagement or promise.
“It used to be my grandmother’s. It’s really not worth anything, but I wanted you to have it,” he said. “I found it in my dresser the other day.”
“Thank you,” I said, a little amazed he had given me a family ring. “It’s really nice of you.”
His jaw got tight and he suddenly looked like he regretted giving it to me. “It’s not like…you know, a ring ring.” he said. “It’s not an heirloom or anything, just something my grandfather made for my grandma and I somehow got a hold of it.”
“Don’t worry, I know. An engagement ring would have to have a big ol’ diamond, anyway,” I joked, sensing his discomfort.
I took the ring out of my mouth and looked at it. Slimy with my spit, it shined a bit more than usual. It was ugly. I had recognized that the moment he gave it to me. Since it was too big for any of my fingers, I had put it on a chain of beads and occasionally wore them around my neck. He had given it to me halfheartedly so I wore it halfheartedly. Maybe it was his last ditch effort to commit to me. By giving me a tangible sign of commitment – even if it was a worthless piece of family jewelry – maybe he felt like he would have to fully commit to me. Maybe it was a peace offering when I didn’t realize there was a conflict. Maybe it was a pathetic attempt at making up for what I was about to find in a few weeks. Whatever it was, it didn’t make much sense.
I remembered his face the night before, when he came into the room, seeing me with his phone my hand. Shocked. Eyes and mouth gaping. Taking a second and hoping the worst hadn’t happened, he swallowed and asked, “Did I miss a call?”
“No, but who the fuck is ‘Belle My Dearest’?”
Suddenly I realized the emptiness in my stomach. I blinked hard and dropped the ring on the pile. I took the empty bottles, placed each neatly in the cardboard caddy, and crowned the weepy mound.
15 thoughts on “Returning the Ring”
Oh the heartbreak!
What now you can see.
Well I do believe that what they say is true,
“what doesn’t destroy you,
Makes you stronger.”
It’s just no fun in the midst of the pain.
You’ve got that right.
Since I’ve started writing, I’ve begun to see events in my life as potential writing material, so that’s a plus. 🙂
I take it you’ve never read The Elements of Style
HAHA… okay, i really really REALLY hope pouring beer all over his shit is non fiction. what a dick, that scott… lolz
Your calling seems to be writing! Forget what Scott said. I like this a lot and you show some killer chops.
Awesome! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. It means a lot!
Only good thing about heartbreaks are posts like this. :p
Haha I agree! Thanks for reading!
This brought tears to my eyes this morning, having been on both sides of a similar situation. Heartbreak I’ve felt on learning of someone’s transgressions, heartbreak I know I’ve caused and in retrospect have possibly lost something amazing, and heartbreak because many years ago this same person did something quite similar to me and reading from another’s experience just brings back anger from a decade ago – so interesting to see that some people truly don’t change.
Beautiful work, darling. Your blog makes me smile, knowing there’s another beautiful woman out there struggling to make sense of her newly discovered alone-time.
Hindsight is always 20/20, huh? If there’s one thing I can thank him for, it’s for giving me the experience so I don’t make the same mistake twice.
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, it means a lot.
I really liked how you interjected the text messages into the blog. Nicely written, so much so that I share in your disgust for this Scott guy lol. My first book was autobiographical fiction. I don’t know if it was hard for you to write about this stuff, because sometimes it was hard for me-but it also helped me to get over the situation.
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“Just go out there and get your heart broken in, so it’ll be ready when you really need it.” Y: The Last Man, Brian K. Vaughan
Great post. I love the black marker over the eyes, almost as good as ripping their heads off. Isn’t it always the case that you don’t have any good pictures of you without the ‘them’ at some event that you’d love to keep? That’s how I feel when I look back at Prom pictures, ages ago but still it stings.